Entry 1:
- The name of this good sir is Vicky, Vicky Kaushal
- He has a distinctively active family-social life. Living in Savannah, Georgia
Entry 2
- Despite being considerably forward, sparking conversations on the street with seemingly anyone. He has a constant buzz in his head telling him that others don’t see him the way he wants to be known. He’s not enough
- This character’s voice should be shown as someone who was born in India and raised in the South (Georgia); his voice to us Californians considered slightly zesty though not so much as to tip someone off. He uses common phrases usually used by natives to fit in and distinguish himself from his true motherland
9/19 100 Words: Vicky
Chatters of small talk dissipated as the man in the grey suit on the other end of the table rose. Lub-dub, Lub-dub, lub… lub — is that what it feels to skip a heart beat? Normally I could spark a conversation on the street with anyone but this— this was different. The companies board meetings always felt unpleasant; the announcement of an upcoming brief stuck a mix of stress and anxiety without question. I shut my eyes as an orange beam struck my face from the expansive floor-ceiling windows across. In a second, menacing stares from every corner attack my existence.
9/26 100 Words: Vickey
Lub-dub, Lub-dub, lub… lub — is that what it feels to skip a heart beat? Sensations that of a poignant creature crawling down the spine. I walk down Bellagio’s lobby, towards the registrar. The expansive white heaven widens, scattered with gold and crystal. A fountain of As I walked towards before meeting up with them filled my chest with a numbness. His silhouette rises the other end of the table, the blur of a chatter dissipates to indiscernible noise. I shut my eyes as a luminous beam struck my face from the expansive floor-ceiling windows across. I adore the look of golden hour shine on my face, though stares piercing from around the oval don’t tell the same story.
Add more stops and details
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Moist stone smell
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Rough stone detailing
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Scrap metal around the roofs
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Beige and unpainted buildings
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Exquisite engraving and stone window carving designs
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Piercing sun boiling the skin, rather than frying
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Moist enviornment
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Narrow and crampt pathways between buildings
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Mid winter
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6am
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Clear sky
#3 Week 7: Conflict
He needs therapy and some good books. Friends help too…
Self vs society
Alent invasion
Social divide
plague
Addiction
| Memoir | Fiction |
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| I could explore my whole interpretation of “Observe”— a really deep and vast definition I have from cultivated experiences. | An alien invasion could be based on the 1990 civil rights + Indian immigrant rise. Tax distribution and |
Week 7: Time manipulation
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The way the animators use time to their advantage is to depict moments of interest or drama.
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Speakers use pauses, inflection and tone flips
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Writers use detailed moments vs brief summary of plot
Flashback shows a change in character that staying in the present is not.
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Some anchor shot in the present, using a clear shift from present to past.
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Flashback story revealing past info and importance of events ( stay in past since your going back in time) (could be a lot of intentional moment flowing together to leave an emotional residue and contrast with the present)
I could flash back into his social situations.
Week 8: Memoir Structure Notes:
5 Key Things Exercise:
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One- Niranjan… Crystalline winter breeze was wishing through cracks of a door. It was halfway through
- He was just observing his nails with intention every 5 minutes or so
- I observe how he takes breaks and manages school flawlessly
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Anuj
- Taught about observation
- He used to be an introvert before he left Ishaan and John
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Yash
- Social Eli Sanvi
Week 9
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Complete one of the brainstorms provided
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What if model,if you have ideas, expand, review your writers journal and the slides for week 7 conflict and these characters for ideas